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The Anniversary
“Do you think she’s going to like it?” I asked Mako desperately. Giving him the note for what I intended to make for Asami tomorrow night.
“It looks fine to me,” the freshly promoted sergeant shrugged, as he handed the paper back to me. “I’m sure she’ll love it all the same.”
“Yeah,” I chuckled nervously. “Maybe she will. But,” I began to feel flushed, “wh-what if it’s not enough? I mean, it’s not entirely practical for her. It could even get her killed if she’s not careful. Or maybe she’ll not like how the color looks and-” I started to hyperventilate, with blood rushing throughout my body wildly. Until Mako grabbed me by the shoulders, and told me,
“Korra, calm down,” and made us sit on the couch. He sighed, and asked, “Are you alright?” I glanced at him, but instead focused on twiddling my thumbs. “Korra, is there something you want to talk
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Legend of Gao: Prologue
Book 1: Past
Prelude: Little Cabbage Boy

It had only been a year since the assassination of Avatar Korra, and the world was still mourning for her loss. People just thought she couldn’t be stopped, after her bringing back the Air Nation, creating the Republic Portal, stopping the Equalists, the Red Lotus, the Earth Empire, the Neo-Earth Empire, and recently, took down the deadly Phoenix Brigade, that nearly caused an assassination of their very own. She seemed unstoppable. But now, she was gone, and was never coming back.  
Although it was the end for Korra, it was far from the end of the Avatar. As the White Lotus agents were finally closing in on where the next one was. Following the nose of the ever trustworthy Bum-Ju (given to them by Master Bumi himself), they were able to track down the next incarnation a lot quicker than their predecessors.
The five white cloaked men followed the little dragonfly bunny to Chin City. It was a little hard to navigate since today
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Mass Effect 3: Redux 15
Chapter 15: Shroud
Mordin Solus discussed his plan for the genophage cure. After some brief planning near the War Room, Victus agreed that the best way to distribute the cure in the fastest way possible, is to subject Eve's DNA sequence into a gigantic device known as the Shroud. Apparently it was once one of many machines that were built centuries ago by the Salarians, in an effort to uplift the Krogan, and convince them to fight for the Council back when the Rachni were still a major threat. Instead of the valuable ally they have now working on the Crucible. It was originally built to clean up the radioactive atmosphere the Krogans created thanks to their self-imposed nuclear winter. Help improve the planet's climate basically. Although there was now only one Shroud tower left operational, it will still be enough to work. It would convert the vaccine into the air, and cure all the Krogans that breathed it in. At least, that's how Shepard interpret it.
With the Normandy now in
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Mass Effect 3: Redux 14
Chapter 14: Visiting Ms. Williams
A few more weeks had past for Shepard, both with good missions, and bad. The headaches haven’t been bothering him for a while, but it didn’t make his mood any better. As usual he had to perform odd jobs and special missions for both Wrex and Victus in order to keep their “strong” alliance. All the while Mordin worked away with Eve, struggling to think of a way to create a genophage vaccine. There were some good missions over the course, such as successfully rescuing civilians from invading Orthus or Reaper forces. Then there were others that….the Commander preferred to keep to himself.
At least that was what EDI noticed when she found him chatting away with Chawkwas and Mordin in the medical bay. All but Mordin were drinking liquor away while recalling one of the more, fondly remembered missions in the past week.
“Okay,” Shepard continued his story after taking a quick sip of his ice brandy, “so Co
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Mass Effect 3: Redux 13
Chapter 13: Assault of Sur’Kesh
The lab was in a panic as the alarm blared. It announced,
“Alert! Unidentified vessels have breached the perimeter.” Most of the Salarians quickly made haste towards the nearest exit, or gather as much research as they could before leaving. One of the scientists ordered a few soldiers manning the terminals,
“Give me an update!”
“Outbound communications have been severed!” said the soldier, worryingly. “We're cut off!”
“Secure all data to offsite location!” ordered the soldier next to him. While that was going on, another soldier went up to check on the outside radar system. Shepard, refusing to be in the dark, came up to the Salarian, and asked, with Mordin and his squad following,
“What's happening?”
“We have multiple ships inbound!” reported the alien soldier. Before the Commander could react, he saw that there was an urgent message being sent to his omni-t
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Mass Effect 3: Redux 12
Chapter 12: The Demands
It was a rough week for everyone on the Normandy. Shepard trying to get supporters for the war in any way he could. Liara trying to figure out the mysteries of the Crucible. Garrus calibrating while trying to forget his homeworld was still burning. Scalb trying dextro recipes that wouldn't make the Turian vomit purple. EDI, questioning what it meant to be an organic (for some reason, Shepard couldn’t understand why). And there newest addition, Javik, was trying to adapt to the ship to be as efficient as possible. Or at least that's what he claimed to be doing since most of the time he had been just seen meandering around the ship, and giving everybody death glares at whoever passed his line of sight. Not to mention all of the other missions the crew had every other day. Hell, a few days back Shepard, EDI, and Liara were able to save the students of Grissom Academy, and their new teacher, Jack, from the hands of Orthus. Three things were noted on tha
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Mass Effect 3: Redux 11
Chapter 11: Javik
The capital of Xe'Iros was burning. What was once the brilliant 18th Imperial Fleet, that was numbered in hundreds of ships, with thousands of proud and strong warriors, was now reduced to nothing more but three ships, and fourteen men.
Commander Javik was the leader of those men, and still their numbers continued to drop. There was no response from any of the military forces on the planet. The only other contact that the Commander had left of the Empire, was the planet’s imperial VI, Victory. He stood firm against the onslaught of nearly endless Husks. It was bad enough that they were starting to figure out how to use the weapons of his own soldiers, but now, the Avalon has been producing them at such a rate that they were outnumbering the remaining true Protheans left on not just this planet, but the whole galaxy. The Commander didn’t know it yet, but this was the day, that their war would finally end.
Javik was firing his plasma rifle at the
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Mass Effect 3: Redux 10
Chapter 10: His Name Was Harper
It did not take long for the plant to start making an obnoxiously loud alarm throughout the cavern. Shepard knew that the energy wave wouldn't harm him or his team, but he thought it would be better to retreat from the caverns anyway, due to the disruption was causing some loose stalactites to fall. The squad pushed their way out of the tunnels as fast as they could, fighting off any enemy that got in their way, Husk, Collector, and even Orthus agents that just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. Although as the three soldiers ran through the stone passageways, Shepard saw a glimpse of the Avalon on a higher level, ordering the scrambling Collectors to save all of the experimental Husk forms before the pulse rendered them useless.
The two of them exchanged glances for just a second. But the way their eyes made contact, for Shepard at least, it felt like a year. Seeing the pulsing, red veins of the bizarre synthetic/organic eyes wa
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Hi, I know it's been a LONG time since I've posted anything. Thesis projects took over all my free time, and getting my life together has caused 
a major writer's block. I will get things done eventually. 

But that's not why I'm writing. Bleach has just ended today. And seeing that one of my first posts on this website was about Bleach. AND I made
two journals concerning Naruto's problems and its ending. I thought it would only make sense that I made one for Bleach as well. 
So...here we go. *deep inhale* 

Back in my high school days, I loved Bleach. It was one of my favorite ongoing animes, and was the one that introduced me to both the anime
and manga communities. Ichigo was once one of my favorite shoenan protagonists. Chad and Kenpachi were was once two of the most badass
anime characters I've seen. Aizen, was once not only my favorite anime villain, but one of my favorite villains of all TIME. I loved everything 
and everyone, from Ichigo's friends, to the Soul Society Captains, to the Espada (with the exception of Nnoitra and Zommari because I found 
both of them annoying and boring respectively BI), even if one particular character or moment wasn't great, the good GREATLY outweighed
the bad.

Which made it all the more disheartening for me once I read up to the point in the manga where the story started to fall apart. My rose-tinted
glasses of fandom started to crack, and the flaws were starting to get harder and harder to ignore. And before I knew it, the series that I once
held in such high regard, to the point where I began writing stories inspired by Kubo's work...collapsed into a mire of overcomplicated contradictions,
long-winded awkward dialogue, confusingly vague motivations, and fights that either lasted way too long, or not long enough, with characters
that I struggled to even care about.

Now everyone who once read/watched Bleach has their own interpretation of when things started to go sour. Some say it was immediately AFTER
the Soul Society Saga, others say it was after Ichigo's fight with Grimmjow, others say it was Ighigo's fight with Ulquiorra. I personally feel it went
bad once Aizen cut down Harribel for no other reason than she was the only Espada left standing. But regardless of WHEN it started to happen, Bleach's
downfall in quality became apparent. Of course this didn't affect hardcore Bleach fans who were with the series all the way through the Fullbringers arc
and even through the final one. And god bless their hearts for staying positive despite the contrary. But even they couldn't keep it after the final fight
which everyone, unanimously thought was the worst climax of the series in SO many ways. But, I'm not writing it to list those ways.

I'm writing this as a send-off to Bleach. Because the most frustrating thing about Bleach post-Aizen, is that you could TELL that there was still a good
and engaging story wrapped deep within the bullshit. And I can recognize that the Thousand Year Blood War Arc, could've been the GREATEST arc
the series could've had. But it didn't, simply because of two things. One: Kubo over-complicated the Quincies to the point that not even HE remembered
what they were at times. and Two: Lack of focus on not just Ichigo, or Uryu, but any focus in general. One of the biggest faults that Bleach has over
Naruto, is that Naruto although ignoring its vast side-cast, still focused on its main players. Bleach was the inverse, the main cast, mainly Ichigo's own
friends were pushed to the side, for more focus on characters where most of which took away more screentime than the hero of the story.

And as much as I hate to paraphrase Donald Trump, but Kubo could've Made Bleach Great Again. If he had a more solid idea of what he was planning to
do with the Sternritter, and not beat around the bush when it came to the backstory ABOUT them, and their relationship to Soul Society. 

Let's compare the Espada to the Sternritter. The Espada, and the Arrancar in general, although not all of them having the best of fights, we always knew
were considered a big deal. Because there was a long build-up to them. Starting with Grimmjow's lackeys, and introducing us to them being ranked by numbers.
First through how each Arranchar was made by Aizen, and the top 10 being the strongest of the strong. 10 being the lowest, and one being the highest.
....Which was stupidly retconned by Yammy but there's no time for that. The Espada and the whole numbering system of their heiarchy was easy to understand.
So when we see characters face progressively higher and higher numbers we can understand how much of a big deal they all are. Sure, most of them
didn't live up to the "Captain killing" reputation when they were originally introduced. But the point is that there was build-up, and a sense of hierarchy among
Aizen's troops.  

Ywach and the Sternritter, have NONE of that. The weirdest thing about this whole Quincy villain group, is that we've seen nothing but them, yet at the same 
time, have learned close to NOTHING about them. Unlike the Espada whom slowly built themselves up through threat after threat, the Sternritters just...show up. 
Not even in Karakura Town, but just in Soul Society and immediately causing havoc. With the audience knowing close to nothing about who they are, why they have
powers related to the alphabet, and most importantly, how they survived the purge that wiped out the Quincy species THOUSANDS of years ago. Heck, the only 
reason Ichigo even got involved was because the Sternritters were attacking Hueco MUNDO instead of Karakura Town. A desert wasteland full of monsters and death. 
So there's even more disconnection for our hero before the arc even starts. Sure they're attacking the friends he met there, and we later learn he's part Quincy later. 
But still, there needed to be more of a set up to the Vandenreich than just them...immediately invading the two known planes of the afterlife. 

And to this day, even after Bleach is over, I STILL barely understand how the Sternritter worked. Like I understand that they gained their powers by Ywach writing letters
of the alphabet into their soul with his holy blood and THAT is what gives them their range of powers. But outside of random abilities, they never seemed to have any 
form of ranking outside of "Their Majesty" and Jugram, who was the second in command/heir/commander of the Sternritter. And that was it. We didn't even know that 
there even WAS a royal guard until they were immediately introduced once Quincy god man went to kill the Soul King. We don't even know how the nature of the powers
work. Like, why is it only a letter, and not a WORD. And what constitutes that letter turning into the word of power, is it random, or is it the very first word that pops into 
that Quincy's head? It's so VAGUE that it's frustrating. But I could literally go on for HOURS about what better powers I would give the Sternritter rather than what they 
ended up getting. 

Now, if Kubo just made the letters a bit more consistent. Like, the lower in the alphabet the weaker you were. It would be easier to understand. As well as just, introduce, 
ALL the Sternritter from the get go, instead of just creating random weird characters that pop into his head from week to week. Have the Royal Guard consist of Pernidas,
Askin Nak LeVarr, Bambietta, and As Nodt, and you already have a team of formidable broken powers right there. C-F. And I'm certain you could make them appear just a
broken and powerful as the previous Royal Guard if you just used their powers in a different light.

As for the fights with the MANY Sternritter. Just have Gremmy create his OWN V-Sternritters and have Kenpachi and the Vizards fight THOSE guys, while the Captains, and Vice-
Captains, and friendly Arranchars team up to take down the rest of them. It's not that hard to believe or write. And also give Mayuri just ONE fight instead of FOUR. >8(

So lastly we can just leave the Royal Guard to Ichigo and his friends as they try to stop Ywach. And we would finally get to the most important part of what this final arc should've
been about. Uryu Ishida's struggle as a Quincy. Out of ALL of the characters in Bleach, this guy was the most neglected.  This was a character, whose very RACE we thought was 
COMPLETELY extinct, with the obvious exception of his dad. A kid who literally had, NO clue if there was any OTHER Quincies out there in the world, and had to shoulder the duty
of continuing the legacy himself. And now, this...sudden army of Quincies show up proving him to be wrong. And he has an opportunity to finally give Soul Society the justice that 
his race deserved as they were mercilessly slaughtered by them. But slowly realizing that his, once thought revolution leader, is actually a cold, uncaring god who dreams of conquering
and destroying reality. And works his way up through the Majesty's ranks just to be by his side. Waiting for the BEST opportunity to take him out. For the sake of not just the world,
not only for his race, but for his non-Quincy friends too. To show that he was MORE than just the LAST QUINCY. 

This could've been, a GREAT story. Ichigo and friends trying to confront Uryu, only to see him loose his way to Ywach's charisma and power. Ichigo trying to reach to his friend, while 
also trying to reach and understand his new found lineage as a demi-Quincy himself. ALL of that character development. ALL of that context. ALL of that drama. WASTED. On padding 
and random bullshit fights with fat black guys with "love" powers. >BI

And the saddest thing is. The ending chapter of Bleach itself. IS a good chapter. Ichigo and Orihime getting together, Renji and Rukia getting together, pleasing my shipping side,
as well as giving the rest of Ichigo's friends logical outcomes and careers. Heck, even the kids are adorable. 83 ....But even in THAT chapter they still drop questions that Kubo KNOWS
will never be answered.

The amount of unanswered questions is....staggering. And not JUST in the final arc. But...nearly all of them past Soul Society. WHAT was Ywach's relationship with his dad, the Soul King?
Why did Ginjou go rogue? What WAS the act that banished Szayel Aporro Granz from the Espada, and what did he do to get back INTO it? What happened to the Mayuri's zombie Arranchars?
How did Orihime get over her Stockholm syndrome with Ulquiorra? What did the K of BG9 DO? What did Shinji's bankai DO? WHO IS THE NEW SOUL KING?! Just question, after question, after
question. And ALL of it is going to be left unresolved. With nothing to look on outside of the announcement of a live action Bleach movie. Which at this point, I'm not sure even the most 
hard of the Bleach fandom is looking forward to it. Even if it DOES turn out to be great like the Rurouni Kenshin movies. It won't wash out the...disappointment that Kubo left behind. 

A disappointment that no ending can truly fix. 

And on that sad note. I say goodbye to Bleach. You may not have been the brightest of stars in the sky, but I will always remember you fondly, for good and for worse. :)

So long Bleach. And may a thousand broken english butterfly metaphors sing thee to thy rest. 

*pours out ink in memory* :( 

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Hi, I know it's been a LONG time since I've posted anything. Thesis projects took over all my free time, and getting my life together has caused 
a major writer's block. I will get things done eventually. 

But that's not why I'm writing. Bleach has just ended today. And seeing that one of my first posts on this website was about Bleach. AND I made
two journals concerning Naruto's problems and its ending. I thought it would only make sense that I made one for Bleach as well. 
So...here we go. *deep inhale* 

Back in my high school days, I loved Bleach. It was one of my favorite ongoing animes, and was the one that introduced me to both the anime
and manga communities. Ichigo was once one of my favorite shoenan protagonists. Chad and Kenpachi were was once two of the most badass
anime characters I've seen. Aizen, was once not only my favorite anime villain, but one of my favorite villains of all TIME. I loved everything 
and everyone, from Ichigo's friends, to the Soul Society Captains, to the Espada (with the exception of Nnoitra and Zommari because I found 
both of them annoying and boring respectively BI), even if one particular character or moment wasn't great, the good GREATLY outweighed
the bad.

Which made it all the more disheartening for me once I read up to the point in the manga where the story started to fall apart. My rose-tinted
glasses of fandom started to crack, and the flaws were starting to get harder and harder to ignore. And before I knew it, the series that I once
held in such high regard, to the point where I began writing stories inspired by Kubo's work...collapsed into a mire of overcomplicated contradictions,
long-winded awkward dialogue, confusingly vague motivations, and fights that either lasted way too long, or not long enough, with characters
that I struggled to even care about.

Now everyone who once read/watched Bleach has their own interpretation of when things started to go sour. Some say it was immediately AFTER
the Soul Society Saga, others say it was after Ichigo's fight with Grimmjow, others say it was Ighigo's fight with Ulquiorra. I personally feel it went
bad once Aizen cut down Harribel for no other reason than she was the only Espada left standing. But regardless of WHEN it started to happen, Bleach's
downfall in quality became apparent. Of course this didn't affect hardcore Bleach fans who were with the series all the way through the Fullbringers arc
and even through the final one. And god bless their hearts for staying positive despite the contrary. But even they couldn't keep it after the final fight
which everyone, unanimously thought was the worst climax of the series in SO many ways. But, I'm not writing it to list those ways.

I'm writing this as a send-off to Bleach. Because the most frustrating thing about Bleach post-Aizen, is that you could TELL that there was still a good
and engaging story wrapped deep within the bullshit. And I can recognize that the Thousand Year Blood War Arc, could've been the GREATEST arc
the series could've had. But it didn't, simply because of two things. One: Kubo over-complicated the Quincies to the point that not even HE remembered
what they were at times. and Two: Lack of focus on not just Ichigo, or Uryu, but any focus in general. One of the biggest faults that Bleach has over
Naruto, is that Naruto although ignoring its vast side-cast, still focused on its main players. Bleach was the inverse, the main cast, mainly Ichigo's own
friends were pushed to the side, for more focus on characters where most of which took away more screentime than the hero of the story.

And as much as I hate to paraphrase Donald Trump, but Kubo could've Made Bleach Great Again. If he had a more solid idea of what he was planning to
do with the Sternritter, and not beat around the bush when it came to the backstory ABOUT them, and their relationship to Soul Society. 

Let's compare the Espada to the Sternritter. The Espada, and the Arrancar in general, although not all of them having the best of fights, we always knew
were considered a big deal. Because there was a long build-up to them. Starting with Grimmjow's lackeys, and introducing us to them being ranked by numbers.
First through how each Arranchar was made by Aizen, and the top 10 being the strongest of the strong. 10 being the lowest, and one being the highest.
....Which was stupidly retconned by Yammy but there's no time for that. The Espada and the whole numbering system of their heiarchy was easy to understand.
So when we see characters face progressively higher and higher numbers we can understand how much of a big deal they all are. Sure, most of them
didn't live up to the "Captain killing" reputation when they were originally introduced. But the point is that there was build-up, and a sense of hierarchy among
Aizen's troops.  

Ywach and the Sternritter, have NONE of that. The weirdest thing about this whole Quincy villain group, is that we've seen nothing but them, yet at the same 
time, have learned close to NOTHING about them. Unlike the Espada whom slowly built themselves up through threat after threat, the Sternritters just...show up. 
Not even in Karakura Town, but just in Soul Society and immediately causing havoc. With the audience knowing close to nothing about who they are, why they have
powers related to the alphabet, and most importantly, how they survived the purge that wiped out the Quincy species THOUSANDS of years ago. Heck, the only 
reason Ichigo even got involved was because the Sternritters were attacking Hueco MUNDO instead of Karakura Town. A desert wasteland full of monsters and death. 
So there's even more disconnection for our hero before the arc even starts. Sure they're attacking the friends he met there, and we later learn he's part Quincy later. 
But still, there needed to be more of a set up to the Vandenreich than just them...immediately invading the two known planes of the afterlife. 

And to this day, even after Bleach is over, I STILL barely understand how the Sternritter worked. Like I understand that they gained their powers by Ywach writing letters
of the alphabet into their soul with his holy blood and THAT is what gives them their range of powers. But outside of random abilities, they never seemed to have any 
form of ranking outside of "Their Majesty" and Jugram, who was the second in command/heir/commander of the Sternritter. And that was it. We didn't even know that 
there even WAS a royal guard until they were immediately introduced once Quincy god man went to kill the Soul King. We don't even know how the nature of the powers
work. Like, why is it only a letter, and not a WORD. And what constitutes that letter turning into the word of power, is it random, or is it the very first word that pops into 
that Quincy's head? It's so VAGUE that it's frustrating. But I could literally go on for HOURS about what better powers I would give the Sternritter rather than what they 
ended up getting. 

Now, if Kubo just made the letters a bit more consistent. Like, the lower in the alphabet the weaker you were. It would be easier to understand. As well as just, introduce, 
ALL the Sternritter from the get go, instead of just creating random weird characters that pop into his head from week to week. Have the Royal Guard consist of Pernidas,
Askin Nak LeVarr, Bambietta, and As Nodt, and you already have a team of formidable broken powers right there. C-F. And I'm certain you could make them appear just a
broken and powerful as the previous Royal Guard if you just used their powers in a different light.

As for the fights with the MANY Sternritter. Just have Gremmy create his OWN V-Sternritters and have Kenpachi and the Vizards fight THOSE guys, while the Captains, and Vice-
Captains, and friendly Arranchars team up to take down the rest of them. It's not that hard to believe or write. And also give Mayuri just ONE fight instead of FOUR. >8(

So lastly we can just leave the Royal Guard to Ichigo and his friends as they try to stop Ywach. And we would finally get to the most important part of what this final arc should've
been about. Uryu Ishida's struggle as a Quincy. Out of ALL of the characters in Bleach, this guy was the most neglected.  This was a character, whose very RACE we thought was 
COMPLETELY extinct, with the obvious exception of his dad. A kid who literally had, NO clue if there was any OTHER Quincies out there in the world, and had to shoulder the duty
of continuing the legacy himself. And now, this...sudden army of Quincies show up proving him to be wrong. And he has an opportunity to finally give Soul Society the justice that 
his race deserved as they were mercilessly slaughtered by them. But slowly realizing that his, once thought revolution leader, is actually a cold, uncaring god who dreams of conquering
and destroying reality. And works his way up through the Majesty's ranks just to be by his side. Waiting for the BEST opportunity to take him out. For the sake of not just the world,
not only for his race, but for his non-Quincy friends too. To show that he was MORE than just the LAST QUINCY. 

This could've been, a GREAT story. Ichigo and friends trying to confront Uryu, only to see him loose his way to Ywach's charisma and power. Ichigo trying to reach to his friend, while 
also trying to reach and understand his new found lineage as a demi-Quincy himself. ALL of that character development. ALL of that context. ALL of that drama. WASTED. On padding 
and random bullshit fights with fat black guys with "love" powers. >BI

And the saddest thing is. The ending chapter of Bleach itself. IS a good chapter. Ichigo and Orihime getting together, Renji and Rukia getting together, pleasing my shipping side,
as well as giving the rest of Ichigo's friends logical outcomes and careers. Heck, even the kids are adorable. 83 ....But even in THAT chapter they still drop questions that Kubo KNOWS
will never be answered.

The amount of unanswered questions is....staggering. And not JUST in the final arc. But...nearly all of them past Soul Society. WHAT was Ywach's relationship with his dad, the Soul King?
Why did Ginjou go rogue? What WAS the act that banished Szayel Aporro Granz from the Espada, and what did he do to get back INTO it? What happened to the Mayuri's zombie Arranchars?
How did Orihime get over her Stockholm syndrome with Ulquiorra? What did the K of BG9 DO? What did Shinji's bankai DO? WHO IS THE NEW SOUL KING?! Just question, after question, after
question. And ALL of it is going to be left unresolved. With nothing to look on outside of the announcement of a live action Bleach movie. Which at this point, I'm not sure even the most 
hard of the Bleach fandom is looking forward to it. Even if it DOES turn out to be great like the Rurouni Kenshin movies. It won't wash out the...disappointment that Kubo left behind. 

A disappointment that no ending can truly fix. 

And on that sad note. I say goodbye to Bleach. You may not have been the brightest of stars in the sky, but I will always remember you fondly, for good and for worse. :)

So long Bleach. And may a thousand broken english butterfly metaphors sing thee to thy rest. 

*pours out ink in memory* :( 

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