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Once again I'm REALLY sorry for the late reading and commenting. There's no excuse, my bad -_-.
But in any case, damn was there a lot to digest! Kuvira having a daughter and being married to Tonraq is one hell of an interesting plot point, but the reveal of Ai's plan was even more awesome! In fact I'd say everything you introduced this chapter has taken this fic into new and interesting places, and seeing Gao's reactions to them all were genuinely fun to read! It was a bit too exposition-y again but it's still very interesting stuff!
Great work as always!
But in any case, damn was there a lot to digest! Kuvira having a daughter and being married to Tonraq is one hell of an interesting plot point, but the reveal of Ai's plan was even more awesome! In fact I'd say everything you introduced this chapter has taken this fic into new and interesting places, and seeing Gao's reactions to them all were genuinely fun to read! It was a bit too exposition-y again but it's still very interesting stuff!
Great work as always!